Script Redraft

I'm just finished redrafting my script for what i hope is the last time. Like i had mentioned before i have streamlined the themes to solely centre around feminism and male misogynistic character traits. I intend to send the script out to peers so that they can review it - paying specific attention to the critique provided by those who had read previous drafts - hopefully they can give me an analysis of how they feel the story has progressed.